Overall the essay was well written, but if the author wants to make the paper more credible and scientific he/she should have used scientific names.I mean instead of calling all the insects "creatures" use their scientific names. Doing this would be more professional and probably receive a better grade.Also, having sources to back up the definitions and descriptions of each insect would give the paper more credibility.
- 10/09/2002
- 17:18:14
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
First of all the grammer and spelling needed to be better.I'm an advertising major with experience in making commercials. I disagree with the author when he said that commercials are cheaper than all other forms of media. That is NOT true. TV is by far the most expensive because of the cost to make the commercial combined with purchasing the necessary air time.The author should have done a little more research before making such a statement.Other than that the essay was well researched and supported.
- 10/09/2002
- 17:12:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Overall I thought the essay was well written, but I am a little concerned about the first person usage. I couldn't figure out if this was a research paper or an opinion paper. I liked that the author used credible sources, but it would help his paper if he would include a bibliography.
- 05/09/2002
- 14:23:32
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.