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  • Domestic Violence in Australia

    You have alot of useful information here.The one problem I see with it is thta is still appears to be in outline form. Another is that you did not list a bibliography of what sources you used for the information in your paper.Overall I think that with a little work this could be a good essay.
    • 10/09/2002
    • 10:14:23
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Biography

    Pretty good overview.I would suggest that you try and focus in on his major accomplishments during his life.You may want to include within your paper your sources, as well as a work sited page listing the sources you used.
    • 07/09/2002
    • 23:20:58
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.