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  • Small changes to a otherwise great essay

    The only things that I would go back thru the essay and change are the following:1stThe biggest thing is the use of Uppercase letters at the beginning of a sentence. Most of the sentences are fine but there are a few that require a little change.2ndAt the end of the last sentence, instead of a period there should be a question make and the reason is that you are stating a question and not making a statement.I hope that this is useful. Keep up the good work and hang in there.
    • 12/09/2002
    • 16:19:00
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.