User Details For: sremde

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  • Not bad

    Great job capturing the basics of FTZ's and bonded warehouse's.
    • 16/04/2007
    • 10:15:18
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Drugs & Alcohol

    Need to work on grammar. Break this into thesis, supporting paragraphs with your thoughts and back up info.
    • 01/12/2006
    • 12:29:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Check spelling

    You need to check the spelling, but otherwise interesting and dark.
    • 06/10/2006
    • 10:10:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Elaborate more.

    Should keep the two topics separate and elaborate on them. The first topic has good detail but you should continue on with the history up until present day. You left me wanting to know more about both topics not just ending abruptly.
    • 01/12/2005
    • 15:45:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.