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The Effects Of Macbeth's Ambitions.
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Leadership Styles - "Lord Of The Flies".
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Breakdown Of Society - "Lord Of The Flies".
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Just some tips.
This essay has some valid points, however, it could easily be improved greatly if you were to use more formal diction. Lose the personal pronouns and contractions and the essay will be quite good!- 07/12/2005
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