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  • A good one

    QUite a very good story, very suspensful with the use of the count and excellent use of imagery.I am sure the ending could have been more cohesive and less abrupt, a twist would have been more effective.Keep at it
    • 01/11/2003
    • 17:41:32
    • Score: 31 out of 38 people found this comment useful.
  • Not a great essay

    The content is there, however the structure and grammar is not.THis essay is too much of a narrative...maybe great if you want a timeline, but not for attention to detail and info youve missed in your own essay.
    • 01/11/2003
    • 17:33:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    I have just completed an assignment just like this, on homelessness and legal remedies. THe juveniles legal issue is very topical, and pondered over whether i researched it. Your article is excellent, very well researched/evidence and provides a 'real-life' slant to the argument.Besides this i am curious to know where your references are?
    • 07/09/2003
    • 18:17:42
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Great use of quotes and evidence

    This essay has displayed very good usage of quotes and knowledge from the play. The usage of quotes within the context of an essay, has helped me construct some ideas for the structure of my essay.well done
    • 10/11/2002
    • 02:25:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • The red badge of courage

    A very good analysis, some inspirational thought and great use of quotes to display the imagery of Henry's experiences. However the essay would be more interesting and perhaps thought provoking if the context of the quotes was explained a little more rather than re-telling the story, some thought or opinions could strengthen the analysis.
    • 11/09/2002
    • 03:48:00
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Domestic Violence

    Some relatively good content on the forces and factors behind the domestic violence, but in places lacked structure and coherency. Good content and information though.
    • 11/09/2002
    • 03:38:57
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.