I am 18 and when I was about 15 or 16 I would always argue with my mom when she ask me to do something I thought that my life was to busy to help out around the house. But now that I am older and and have a job and i go to collage full-time I realize how much more time I had when I was younger. If I would have just cleaned my room I would have saved my mother a lot of stress. So everyone please help your parents.
- 12/09/2002
- 14:03:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this essay was very well researched. This person spent a lot of time with this paper and deserves a lot of credit
- 11/09/2002
- 17:25:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good job. This Essay has strong topic sentences and good development. There are a few spelling errors along with a few ideas that break unity
- 11/09/2002
- 17:12:49
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.