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  • I really like your beginning!

    I really like the beginning of your essay! Really hooked me in. To bring something that some people can relate to (Star Trek) so you could catch the readers' attention. Good job!
    • 14/12/2005
    • 16:57:39
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.