You show strong perspective and good examples, but you do not recognize such issues as the assisted suicide of people in a "vegitative" state. The most famous example is Terry Schiavo. But overall good job.
- 30/12/2005
- 19:52:54
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You have a strong opinion which shows clearly, but to strengthen your argument you might want to include the opinions of those who support absolutism. You could then disprove their arguments, thus strengthening your own.
- 30/12/2005
- 19:48:32
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A lot of your points are repeated with a little rewording. Maybe try to find more points or just shorten your essay once you have made all of your points. Also, look for synonyms.
- 26/12/2005
- 13:35:07
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