omg, I refute my previous comment this essay is horrible. It has the cohesiveness of a 12 year old. i've counted over 64 grammatical errors and much of it is not concise in any way.
- 03/10/2006
- 17:09:29
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Its ubelievable how many grammer errors this essay consists of 3/10
- 03/10/2006
- 17:00:32
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Although this is a very speculatively interesting subject, I feel that you approached it in the wrong way. My opinion for a better approach would have been for you to start off describing a world without accounting and then bring up its significance.
- 02/10/2006
- 17:23:41
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Some-what well written, however one major point you left out about the significance of finding polar ice on the moon is that it could be an implication as to whether or not we have the capability to breed life there.
- 02/10/2006
- 17:20:09
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