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  • Out sourcing

    I completely agree, if a supervisor or manager fails to delegate and outsource the workload there will be a definite limit to how successful that business or organization can be. A successful business needs to properly delegate tasks through out the workforce.
    • 30/05/2007
    • 06:02:41
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • What is this essay about

    The essay seems to be more about William Golding instead of explaining the details of Lord of the Flies.
    • 08/11/2006
    • 16:00:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Amazon rules

    Amazon definitly had a rocky start but in the end they are one of the most succesful online businesses. Great essay!
    • 23/10/2006
    • 21:49:04
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not very descriptive.

    For such a heavy issue, your essay fails to cover the essential details necessary to address this matter. You have strong points in your essay but no fine points to describe why the kids are the way they are. If you are going to blame gangs and video games you should explain how these factors influence our youth.
    • 23/10/2006
    • 21:45:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Legalize it!!

    As much as a good point you may hold in your essay I truly feel the legalization of this wonderful substance will never come. There are too many hypocrytical people out there and considering the very negative image that the reefer holds, it would truly have to cure a disease not just put someone at ease about dying.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 00:10:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great essay

    I have seen the movie but after reading your essay expressing the emotion behind the book I may have to read it.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 00:06:08
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Elementary 1st grade?

    Seems like a pretty well written paper. Please accurately fill out the other information. Other than that great paper, I agree guns will only breed more violence.
    • 26/06/2006
    • 18:49:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Death penalty

    It is definitly a controversial subject. I can't say I fully agree because there still needs to be order. But none the less a very well written essay.
    • 10/02/2006
    • 21:26:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A great car.

    I have always been amused by the rolls-royce. I had no idea of all the background and how far back the original car was first built.
    • 10/02/2006
    • 11:27:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very useful knowledge.

    Essay included a lot of facts about smoking that I already knew. Suprisingly there was much that I didn't know also. Being a smoker myself, after reading this essay makes me think again.
    • 10/02/2006
    • 11:13:07
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Very true.

    I never realized that prejudice existed in our language in such a way. Very interesting essay.
    • 10/02/2006
    • 11:10:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice point.

    Seems like a harsh subject for high school but holds some strong points. Definitly points out the situation of Australia.
    • 10/02/2006
    • 10:57:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome essay.

    WOW! This is a CRAZY good essay! I took some points from it..hope that's okay. But wow! I like how you set it up, and I love the paragraph structures! Keep up the good work!!!
    • 10/02/2006
    • 10:49:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.