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  • Excellent Job!

    Great essay. Very good ideas on how to get the number of high school students interested in a career in nursing. I am from Eastern Canada and nursing shortage appears to be everywhere. There are many places from the US who come to do job fais to try and attract nurses to the US. I thought the paper was very well written with good citations and a complete list of references. A well deserved 93%.
    • 17/01/2006
    • 18:37:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job.

    I thought this essay was very well written. I was surprised it was only rated at 10th grade level. Could easily be used at a higher level. Kudos to the author.
    • 17/01/2006
    • 18:29:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Describe TQM

    Anyone who does not know what TQM (Total Quality Management) is would be somewhat lost by that comment. As it is the sentence does not really make sense. Maybe if the wording was changed to show that relying on teamwork and high energy make up another component of TQM might be better. Overall a good job though!
    • 17/01/2006
    • 18:16:36
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs more explanation.

    It is a good general overview but could use some more explanation on some of the terms. Toward the end there was some good use of explaining what some of the acronyms were but this was not the case at the beginning.
    • 17/01/2006
    • 18:11:28
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.