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"Pride and Prejudice" and "Our Mutual Friend": A Comparison of Societies Influence upon Marriage Compare and Contrast passages from Jane Austin and Charles Dickens novels
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The writer had some good concepts but need to organize the structure and flow of the essay better. Tended to be repetitive as well as going on tangents. Also word choice effected the impact of the paper, needs to find alternatives to "crazy". Over use of the word lost its effectiveness. Overall the essay did the job of getting the writer's view across.- 04/06/2006
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