I agree with xtina you need to work on your sentence structure, good luck
- 16/02/2006
- 13:18:54
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Good job, but is there nothing else you can find to do?
- 16/02/2006
- 12:42:11
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I thought you had very good details and for the age group, keep up the good work you will get better with time.
- 16/02/2006
- 12:32:16
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I agree with most the others on this one, I dont know where you are going , I do understand nowhere without money.
- 16/02/2006
- 12:28:12
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I think the paper was good in format, I can't believe you got away with it at school, with out having safety tips. Good essay though.
- 16/02/2006
- 12:21:04
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