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Essay List

• Rethinking Columbus Day

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• The War of 1812 - a Second War for Independence?

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• Disillusionment of the American Dream in "The Razor's Edge" (W. Sommerset Maugham)

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• "The Hot Zone": The Deadly Truth (Book Report on The Hot Zone with quotes)

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• Chicago Black Sox Scandal (Brief Summary)

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• Nellie Bly: Daredevil Reporter

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• A Naive Opinion on the Nation's Economic Health (Based off of Reading Naked Economics)

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Comments List

• More Facts?

  This is a good start to an argument, but it should be backed up with more facts. Suggesting that the block schedule reduces the psychological stress of change by "at least 50%" is not real statistical data. Also, if there was a specific quote from "ERIC DIGEST" it would enhance the argument. You have lots of great points - I'm just better at poking holes.
  • 10/09/2006
  • 22:22:03
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• Good Ideas; bad organization.

  You have great ideas and comparisons in this essay. However, it is organized in such a sporadic way that it may be confusing to some readers. Throwing questions and first person into the mix is also a little distracting. I would refine some things, but the main points are great!
  • 26/04/2006
  • 22:55:39
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