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Essay List
"Great Expectations" - Charles Dickens - Atmosphere/ambience and how it is developed (notes easliy converted to essay)
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Roman Generalship In The Campaigns Against Britain - Caesar vs. Agricola
- 1778 words (7 pages)
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"There is no feast without cruelty" To what extent does this apply to "Twelfth Night"?
- 999 words (4 pages)
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"Twelfth Night" by Shakespeare - Consider The Character Of Malvolio, What Is The Purpose Of The Development Of This Character?
- 1171 words (5 pages)
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Compare and Contrast 'Thistles' by Ted Hughes and 'Tall Nettles' by Edward Thomas - Cambridge english literature coursework
- 803 words (3 pages)
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Charles Dickens - "Great Expectations" - Do Estella and Miss Havisham present an antithetical example of Victorian femininity?
- 1309 words (5 pages)
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Comments List
Just a thought...
I read this essay and immediately thought: way too much biographical detail. While some may be relevant to the essay topic, it dominates the essay and basically drowns out the main points made. Good effort but it looks pretty plagiarised; whether I am right or not is another matter.- 26/03/2006
- 05:44:46
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Constructive criticism
-Language used is a little bit colloquial-More paragraphing needed-Writer uses the word 'paradigm' a bit too often-Repetitive in places-Writer asks questions during the essay... you're supposed to answer questions not ask them even if they are rhetoric-Several typing/grammatical errorsOverall, an average essay that needs a bit of editing.- 16/02/2006
- 01:03:35
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