I just have to mention that the bibliography is very poorly done. It is missing a lot of information, should be in alphabetical order by the author's last name, and should never be numbered.Not only this but you do not mention any references in your text and I highly doubt you paraphrased everything.
- 04/03/2006
- 04:36:51
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I had read this story before and I found your essay excellent. It was well writen, the paragraphs flow together, and you bring up some strong and interesting points. Well done!
- 02/03/2006
- 00:16:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I found this paper to be well written. It was very interesting to read.The only thing I am lost on is how you managed to bring in the wolves sexual desires. He wanted to eat Red Riding Hood, not sleep with her.If you wanted to bring in sexual desires or sexual predators, you would have needed to provide a link and segue into it.
- 26/02/2006
- 21:38:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.