It was good, you seemed to have the important things down but your layout wasn't too organized, I had a time getting though it, but when I finnally did I found it interesting.
- 08/03/2006
- 18:40:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It was really good, all the transitions were really good, overall the entire piece floated. All your points were good as well as the quotes!
- 03/03/2006
- 05:50:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good job, I haven't read the story but after reading your essay I feel that I've understood the basics of the story, good quotes and great transitions everything really seemed to flow together
- 02/03/2006
- 09:54:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I thought it was really good!! Strong overall and everything tied in together! Good job!
- 02/03/2006
- 06:38:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.