There is a good use of quotations, the structure can be improved.
- 23/04/2007
- 20:58:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, but you need more structural techniques to be used.
- 23/04/2007
- 20:38:59
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Found this essay very interesting imo, important key points are presented throughly.
- 26/03/2007
- 17:33:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Took me a long time to 'dig' this essay. Anyways, this essay was useful, with some points that I could have used.
- 08/02/2007
- 06:53:39
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very clear and it is well strucutred. It helped me a lot in my essay. Thanks!
- 08/11/2006
- 01:59:40
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay wasn't as bad as I thought, but it can improve by expanding itself and look into more movies.
- 07/11/2006
- 02:58:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay, but I don't think potatos have salt rates lower than 0.1% impossible right?But still, this is a clear, structured report for references.
- 06/11/2006
- 20:24:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
ekk. The person who submitted this essay got the title wrong, but never the less, this essay was quite good, with a good conclusion, making this an excellent one.
- 05/11/2006
- 11:12:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This essay was good, and this is much better then the one I've done, but still there are some errors, making it an imperfect essay.
- 05/11/2006
- 10:50:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think this essay wasn't good enough, since it uses the first person point of view to talk about things.
- 05/11/2006
- 10:39:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think this essay was useful, and have a clear sentence structure, with good facts supporting it.
- 05/11/2006
- 10:31:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This essay was a nice one, since it provided different information from various sources. It also got some facts that was hard to find in the internet, which I find extremely useful.
- 03/11/2006
- 03:26:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay, since it provides a good and clear view of the author's point, yet not completely biased.
- 03/11/2006
- 03:17:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This essay was not bad, since it got facts from different sources like magazines, making it useful for me.
- 03/11/2006
- 03:14:14
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very informative and helped me lot. Thanks
- 01/11/2006
- 20:25:56
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very thoughtful and interesting essay.
- 01/11/2006
- 20:22:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A well sturctured and clear essay!
- 01/11/2006
- 20:20:25
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
To be honest, this essay was actually quite good, but since my school uses a different system, the experiment was different. But still, it provided me information on how to determine the effect of osmosis in different conditions.
- 01/11/2006
- 03:52:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This essay shows a large amount of relevant information about the Great Depression. It is also well structured, clear and very informative. This hugely helped me in my essay.
- 13/09/2006
- 01:42:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.