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Analytical Comparison focusing on visual and language techniques in portraying vision of Australia in Dorothea Mackellar's - "My Country" and Max Dupain's - "Sunbather"
- 1034 words (4 pages)
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Musical analysis of "Interpol" by Specialist and "You" by Tim Hughes, focusing on the use of melody in the samples.
- 674 words (3 pages)
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Examines the statue "Doryphorous" by Polykleitos and discusses how the human form has been used as a cultural symbol.
- 300 words (1 pages)
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The interpretation of the play, "Othello", in regards to the themes of power and betrayal, focusing on the theatrical portrayal and characterisation of Iago, in particular reference to Act III, Sc III.
- 819 words (3 pages)
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Newspaper article on the events at Deir Yassin.
- 349 words (1 pages)
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French Writing Exam: "Write an email to your friend in France, telling her about how young people spend their time in Australia"
- 156 words (1 pages)
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Discuss the "Cinderella" fairytale through its appropriation, how it is affected by its culture, a different version and Bettelheim's psychoanalytical reading.
- 637 words (3 pages)
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Just some tips
For some constructive criticism, I think you repeated yourself waaay too much. Sometimes I felt like I was reading the same paragraph that I had just read.I put it on word and it was 9 pages and I went through it and cut out anything you had already said and it's now down to 3.I think it's very important to be really concise, espescially if you have a word limit, so you can get as much as possible across in as little words.It's more important to have good CONTENT than lots of WORDS. It also blurs your line of argument if its not structured well and repeated.So I think if you go over your essays, and structure them well and be concise and remember when you've already said something before then your next essay will be great!You're off to a good start. :)- 06/04/2006
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