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  • Just some tips

    For some constructive criticism, I think you repeated yourself waaay too much. Sometimes I felt like I was reading the same paragraph that I had just read.I put it on word and it was 9 pages and I went through it and cut out anything you had already said and it's now down to 3.I think it's very important to be really concise, espescially if you have a word limit, so you can get as much as possible across in as little words.It's more important to have good CONTENT than lots of WORDS. It also blurs your line of argument if its not structured well and repeated.So I think if you go over your essays, and structure them well and be concise and remember when you've already said something before then your next essay will be great!You're off to a good start. :)
    • 06/04/2006
    • 05:01:01
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