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  • Very true

    A few good points of cell phones and the effects discussed, and its good to see both sides of the argument, however it would be better if the structure is outlined more clearly in the introductory paragraph. This will help the reader predict where the argument will lead to, and a general picture of what you are discussing. I'm sure we'll be seeing those developments in the very near future.
    • 29/12/2008
    • 23:00:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    This essay argues a pretty good topic, and it is a major issue in schools nowadays, and it's nice to see someone pointing out the disadvantages. But I think you should have used more practical examples. Also some parts were a little repetitive. Anyway, good job.
    • 27/03/2006
    • 05:10:15
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.