Your sentence structure needs some reworking. More detail could be offered.
- 11/05/2006
- 15:22:04
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Very good subject matter. Needs reference information however.
- 02/05/2006
- 07:59:07
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This really isn't eassy material. Would have been useful as an outline.
- 02/05/2006
- 07:58:05
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You should added your thoughts how things can be changed.
- 02/05/2006
- 07:56:46
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I didn't have much of a stomach to finish the essay.
- 02/05/2006
- 07:55:39
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Very good argument for the influence of religion on writing.
- 02/05/2006
- 07:51:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.