This essay could be improved with a better opening paragraph and a proper conclusion with all the points summarized.Also the essay is biased at the end towards the end , it should have been renamed to "why pc's are better then mac's" etc... not pc's vs mac's as both sides are not equally represented.
- 22/11/2007
- 01:18:52
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This is a nice analysis of the slavery/ servitude theme in the tempest but there should be reference with Caliban and the tempests Colonialism theme.
- 14/11/2007
- 00:04:47
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An excellent review!
- 23/08/2007
- 00:16:22
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A well structured essay with good points about Plath. I like this essay.
- 10/08/2007
- 21:50:31
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The description is ok but it needs to be more in dept to properly describe the book.
- 02/08/2007
- 00:38:13
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A good review of the film Whale Rider and its narrative structure. Your essay structure is a bit messed up in the middle part ... but a commendable essay.
- 02/08/2007
- 00:33:06
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The essay is properly structured, has a solid conclusion and points. Well done.
- 31/07/2007
- 02:30:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Nice practical report. It is properly structured and has a good conclusion.
- 31/07/2007
- 02:10:20
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I agreed with most points, very true but all this is changing the democrats control the senate now?
- 17/03/2007
- 10:04:17
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Nice essay on carnivorous plants, one thing you forgot to mention would be what classifies a plant to be carnivorous?To be carnivorous the plant needs to be able to trap insects and produce enzymes to digest the insect. Alot of plants can trap insect and absorb them but don't produce enzymes to digest the insect therefore aren't carnivorous
- 17/03/2007
- 09:48:49
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Nice essay, properly structured.
- 17/03/2007
- 09:33:12
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Alright essay, should be more formal.
- 10/12/2006
- 01:13:06
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Very interested view of little red riding hood - to modern day girls and predators.
- 06/11/2006
- 00:00:05
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Good work, you could of added the point - macarthism, where that politician marcarthy had people in the US going around at each others throats acusing each other of being a communist when they began to purge members of the communist party in America.
- 26/10/2006
- 05:16:08
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice review, I reckon u should get 90 %
- 06/09/2006
- 03:19:37
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Although this is supposably what happens in theory it doesn't happen in reality. During communism there were people who had high ranks up with the officials and military while everyone else were just peasants. another problem with communism is that industries run under a communist goverment are always inefficinet as workers do not have the incentive to put 100 percent, it can be seen that profit was a factor which communist leaders didnt calculate into there theory
- 24/08/2006
- 02:54:38
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This essay is alright, although you could improve by expanding on your points and adding more points, such as multiculturlism not complete boganism.
- 24/08/2006
- 01:44:35
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Nice points, great structure: you just need a summary at the end to conclude the essay.
- 24/08/2006
- 01:42:26
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This is not an essay, just a poor science experiment report - you should have results and a conclusion.
- 07/08/2006
- 01:15:48
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lol this is more like a poem and certainly not an essay, some gramatical errors but since it was supposably written by a 6 year old :)
- 31/07/2006
- 01:20:10
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Brilliant essay, good points and views of the rise of the Nazi and the horrors of world war 2
- 22/06/2006
- 02:10:49
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This essay is very brief, including more detailed information and expanding on points would help this essay alot.
- 22/06/2006
- 02:07:49
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You forgot to mention the king of all carnivorous plants... Nepenthes, the most sort out, popular and valuable carnirovorus plant in the world. It is know as tropical pitcher plants or monkey cup.
- 22/06/2006
- 02:04:32
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I got a history assesment on the same question but interview a migrant or woman post war, 10 questions. Well this will be very helpful , I have a suspicion that the author attended my school and this is the same assesment just less questions .
- 21/06/2006
- 00:42:01
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I can see lots of effort have been put in but remember in an essay generally it is formal and not in first person. This is generally not an essay but evaluation but still good work.
- 08/05/2006
- 10:14:01
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In case you haven't realised this is a satirical essay/ funny not serious....for fun.... no need to go phsyco over it. I believe its a good satirical essay.
- 08/05/2006
- 05:42:25
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You need to make this abit longer and elaborate in futher detail other then that the content is good.
- 08/05/2006
- 03:25:46
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No conclusive summary which wraps up the whole essay, instead you mentioned what will happen in the future.. more like an article but pretty good.
- 08/05/2006
- 03:16:09
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I like the content of this, hiliarious! Keep up the goodwork / you need to add more to summary and more points its pretty short.
- 08/05/2006
- 02:43:05
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Its an alright essay but , I though you aren't suppose to have headings in an essay... Hepatitis A, Hepatitis b, Hepatitis c etc, instead shouldnt it be Hepatitis A is a highly infectious...etcFor Heptatis b blood and body fluids ..etc
- 06/05/2006
- 22:26:37
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Everything here is very true and realistic, I can relate everything here to myself in a way :(btw you should have mentioned that parents allow children to teenagers to eat junkfood and don't stop them, the weekly snack has become a daily snack. For example I don't see parents going around to teenagers and completely restrain them from drinking softdrinks or eating out
- 06/05/2006
- 22:18:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.