This paper needs a lot of help to it. Your argument was not as broad as maybe it could have been. I award you no points, for making no sense. More input is needed to you're paper.
- 21/07/2003
- 19:04:04
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The conclusion ends rather poorly. The reader is left hanging, and also has no clue where this is coming from. Too many gramatical errors and typos also.
- 31/03/2003
- 19:45:55
- Score: 7 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
This paper needs a lot of help to it. Your argument was not as broad as maybe it could have been. I award you no points, for making no sense.
- 12/03/2003
- 12:23:14
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
With Little words, with great organizational structure. Also, built a strong foundation. Excellently stated.
- 28/01/2003
- 23:21:26
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Very informative. Well written.
- 13/01/2003
- 23:03:24
- Score: 10 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Okay essay. Some grammar errors needs to be readjusted.
- 10/01/2003
- 00:37:48
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay is ok. Your conclusion needed to be much longer. There are many things that you could of stated to your conclusion, but i guess you didn't want too. More facts are needed to it. A conclusion should not end the way you ended it. And you can take that to the bank.
- 08/01/2003
- 10:20:20
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay is average. More facts are needed to your paper. When you submit a paper put the sentences together.
- 02/01/2003
- 18:23:07
- Score: 29 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
Why wouldn't you put paragraphs in their, huh? Overall, i gave you a green rating. Paper is well written.Sincerely,Carolthebrain
- 19/12/2002
- 23:27:38
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I found this essay to be very interesting. You did nice work on this! I give you three thumbs up! Congrats. Well done!
- 18/12/2002
- 14:15:59
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
WOW! Nice job on writing on 'European Civilization'. I gave you a green rating. Keep up the good work.Sincerely,Carolthebrain
- 18/12/2002
- 14:06:52
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
This comment should be taken away immediately(ASAP). The rule is not to write comments to you're own essay. This is commom sense. What are you thinking? There are some miscues in you're paper, and grammatical errors. What are you thinking? Why wouldn't you adjust that? Overall, you're paper is okay.
- 16/12/2002
- 23:26:01
- Score: 8 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This is not informative at all! I agree with Dannycook, that she simply made things up. This essay makes no sense to me at all.
- 29/11/2002
- 07:32:16
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.