I liked your topic. It had great detail. India improved a lot in this years Commonwealth Games. They got 22 gold medals, 17 silver and 11 bronze giving them a total of 50, which put them in fourth place.
- 22/07/2006
- 16:50:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great essay, although you should have listed the language techniques.
- 30/05/2006
- 02:44:18
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was really interesting to read and had good comments on change.
- 27/05/2006
- 20:04:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. I can't believe that although basketballers have the talent to play, they don't show it.
- 25/05/2006
- 23:54:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was pretty good. Although, it was quite boring to read. Overall though, it was alright.
- 21/05/2006
- 03:50:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like your essay. It is also true that in the end, good always defeats evil.
- 21/05/2006
- 00:39:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is quite good and is pretty interesting.
- 20/05/2006
- 21:25:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.