The essay was awesome, as it does reflect two different point of views coming from one person. Nice writing.
- 25/05/2006
- 09:18:14
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The society we currently live in details the morals we have, and outlines each human right clearly. Although, you might make matters worse, in the end it would be welcomed with gratefulness as time passes. This was really sick and I believe its good to act against such things rather than think of the consequences.
- 25/05/2006
- 09:15:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great Work! You covered some great issues, but mentioned little about tackling the issues. Such as, government intervention plays a very important role in this. Such as recovery programs, banning advertisments, communicating health risks through medical centers, removing cigs from display in stores, and many others. Parents do play an important role, but then again, at that age hardly children agree with what the parents say.
- 25/05/2006
- 06:51:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Makes you picture the situation in your head. Very imaginative and poetic. Good Writing.
- 24/05/2006
- 10:36:20
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.