IT WAS GOOD... let me say that. But you write so well I was itching to hear analysis on aspects of mes-en-scene, the acting/directing, music/sound, genre, cinematography.The opening line about characterisation making the film... is that so for all genres? Just food for though :)
- 26/05/2006
- 06:33:48
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There are many many more arguments against the use of capital punishment. Should I list them? I'm thinking revenge vs retribution, human error in the justice system (ie killing innocent people) and the lose of freedom and self respect is far worse than escaping life in prison.Call me crazy/emotional about this subject but I think you could have done alot more with the cons. Structure at the start is hard to read because it doesn't flow so well but I think with a bit of work it could be good.
- 25/05/2006
- 22:20:21
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You speak of the dharma and the chinese parallels... it seems that this piece of writing points out the tradition of religion not general tradition. There are some solid points but the ideas needed to be expanded on and in the future, avoid repeating yourself word for word. I have to say its got the makings of a good piece and I'd like to see it polished up.
- 25/05/2006
- 22:09:23
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