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  • Citation

    Good Essay. Especially for citing so many sorces.
    • 31/05/2006
    • 09:20:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Not very formal essay...

    Mostly chronologicly in order, however very informal wording in some places. Some of the paragraph breaks are in the wrong spots.
    • 29/05/2006
    • 19:08:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Grammer?

    Some gramatical errors, but overall well phrased. I suppose the errors could be due to this being a creative writing peace, but if I were to use this essay, I would correct the grammer. However the mistakes are miniscule and do not take away from the quality of this essay.
    • 28/05/2006
    • 21:41:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • My opinion

    An ok review, although I think that if it is meant to be a complete review of the book, it is missing some critical elements.
    • 28/05/2006
    • 21:27:48
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.