has lots of interesting facts, good job
- 19/05/2004
- 16:28:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
that was really good, you have talent keep on writing.
- 17/05/2004
- 17:29:02
- Score: 13 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
good essay, not too many details but okay.
- 17/05/2004
- 16:28:34
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
lots of info, good job could have been better.
- 13/05/2004
- 17:21:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good points , sounds like you researched this essay alot, good job!
- 13/05/2004
- 11:22:28
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good facts, it sounds like you did some research! good essay.
- 12/05/2004
- 16:08:43
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
good details, good thing you paid attention to the movie. good structure in your essay. good job!
- 12/05/2004
- 11:50:17
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
wow good essay, very well written, i dont think the doctor made the right choice but i didnt write the esssay, good job!
- 11/05/2004
- 17:05:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very well written and researched. you have alot of facts but still some good opinions, great job!
- 11/05/2004
- 11:26:19
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
great essay, i dont think you should have put so much personal stuff in ie: slut, it wasnt his. but it did help the reader to relate.good job!
- 10/05/2004
- 17:45:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a great paper, very well written and in perfect order, this offers great information while not taking a side, great work!
- 10/05/2004
- 17:12:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a great essay it pulled me in and kept me there, but who is "she" you never say, since she died, are you looking for a dead person, or a new love, you should probably end it better but the begining was great if you could fix the end that would win a prize!
- 10/05/2004
- 17:07:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is a good argumentive essay, missing one part. how can someone get out of beinge drinking, and what would happen if the rules got more intense instead of having the age go back to 18? there needs to be a different side of this, im sure the mothers in MAD ( mothers against drunk drivers) wouldnt support this essay, you need to appeal to both sides, as i have learned the hard way in my essay, other than that great work!
- 10/05/2004
- 17:02:02
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
why dont they do this, that could be very helpfull to society, great essay more people should read itto know whats going on with this stuff, great essay!
- 10/05/2004
- 16:51:02
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
lots of good ideas and good facts, good job
- 10/05/2004
- 15:00:18
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
very good essay, i like the way you talk about what they think and how they think. i think you missed kind of a big step and that is all religion is brain washing, they tell you what THEY want you to believe, not necessarily is right. I just skimmed this essay but it sounds great. i like how you put opinion into it not just facts, great writing
- 06/05/2004
- 16:26:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
easy to read, very interesting, good facts and knowledge, good essay alltogether!
- 06/05/2004
- 15:13:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this essay was very descriptive but it had no ending, good details, good essay!
- 06/05/2004
- 14:53:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a great story sad but its the truth this happens to girls everyday and people just turn their heads and say everything is going to be ok. when they know deep down it wont be very sad. great story.
- 06/05/2004
- 14:35:48
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
i honestly wouldnt doubt that this really happened. reading this before my lunch break was a mistake but this is a great persuasive essay!
- 06/05/2004
- 14:20:01
- Score: 17 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
you make very good points and its very well written ,you've got alot of talent!
- 06/05/2004
- 14:05:56
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
so good you could eat it!
- 06/05/2004
- 14:04:35
- Score: 8 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
great, stunning, superb! 100%
- 06/05/2004
- 14:03:23
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
this is very poetic, very scary if you think about it too much, you opened a door im not sure i want to walk into.
- 06/05/2004
- 13:50:54
- Score: 16 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
your sentences didn't flow very well. but it has good points, grea job.
- 06/05/2004
- 13:46:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
hey thanks for helping me with my workstress by reading this, good essay, easy to read and follow, good points i give it 2 thumbs up!
- 06/05/2004
- 13:43:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
you missed a huge part of the book, almost the climax. Where catlin marrys vix's old flame and has a child with him, thats like 2 chapters.! good notes!
- 05/05/2004
- 11:14:29
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a great essay it could have been more in depth with more details, and real stories to relate to not just facts, but a good essay all around.
- 05/05/2004
- 11:08:33
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
made my mouth water, great details
- 30/04/2004
- 17:29:10
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is a great essay, though i dont know what the point was but to talk about prayer and the influence that adults have over children. Great work , lots of thought.
- 28/04/2004
- 17:53:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is a sure B+ essay, it could use some umph, some passion, or pazazz. but good essay alltogether
- 28/04/2004
- 17:44:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
you have very good knowledge of this experiment and book, good insite. good job
- 28/04/2004
- 17:23:09
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You really know what your talking about,information is valid. great job
- 28/04/2004
- 17:03:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
it sounds like you put alot of thought and knowledge into this, great work!
- 28/04/2004
- 16:50:36
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
while reading your essay i found myself feeling like i was reading a highschool text book, great and informative very standard.
- 28/04/2004
- 16:46:19
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I see no enthusiasm in your work, give me some ideas, give me reasons! put more life into it, good topic though!
- 28/04/2004
- 16:04:40
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
this is a fantastic essay, very persuasive, i could feel the passion that the author had for the subject. it has great facts, not just "i think" ab.fab
- 28/04/2004
- 14:46:23
- Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
this was very informative and interesting. it could use more facts, stats, and quotes but very good overall
- 28/04/2004
- 14:39:28
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
it was well written, but it didnt have enough details. it sounds good as an overall of the story
- 28/04/2004
- 14:27:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very long, not many exciting facts, didnt catch my attention very well, researched well.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:47:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.