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  • Genocide in Sudan

    Very good piece.
    • 11/03/2007
    • 12:55:54
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Film + Book Comparison: "holes" and "Big Fish"

    A few grammatical errors, but an overall good, short essay.
    • 10/03/2007
    • 21:01:37
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Why is it important to understand the new attitudes about US foreign policy at the turn of the twentieth century?

    This is not an essay but a discussion question.
    • 09/03/2007
    • 14:28:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The Character McMurphy in "One flew over the Cookoo's nest"

    A little short at 300 words, but the reader gets a general sense of the character.
    • 09/03/2007
    • 10:43:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Life, Death (Poem)

    Very nice, flowed easy and showed deep meaning.
    • 04/03/2007
    • 12:50:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Cultural Values and Personal Ethics Paper

    I thought this was a good essay, however the conclusion could have been more developed.
    • 04/03/2007
    • 12:43:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Personal Values Development Paper.

    Ok essay, but missing a conclusion.
    • 04/03/2007
    • 12:06:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Children who suffer from obesity

    Poor grammar and punctuation.
    • 26/01/2007
    • 06:18:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A Personal Narrative Essay based on my life and freindship.

    A good narrative.
    • 20/01/2007
    • 11:32:30
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Critical Analysis of Beautiful Day by U2

    I wish I could say this was a good analysis, but it just doesn't hit home. You effectively let the reader know that you love the song and it is powerful to you, but you don't carry it through enough to make the reader understand why.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 14:01:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Environmental Factors

    Nice job and very informative.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:44:01
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Injustice

    Too many grammatical mistakes
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:39:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Business ethics and diversity in the work place

    Good essay overall, but there are some problems with spelling and grammer.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:33:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Engineering Studies - short report of how a Vacuum Cleaner works.

    Short, sweet, informative.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:26:40
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Change in the power of american government

    Wow, a lot of information in so little words.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:16:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 1 Peter 3: 1 - 7 Analysis

    Nice analysis. My only suggestion is that you could have included a more thoughful anaylsis of verse 7.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:12:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • "Nothing Gold Can Last"

    Good job! Nice analysis, very thought provoking.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 13:03:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The Genetics of Manic Depression and Schizophrenia

    This is an excellent essay. Very well written and helps the reader to understand these two diseases.
    • 13/01/2007
    • 12:58:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Creation Myths (Similarities and Differences)

    What stood out to me was inconsistencies in the number of "myths" - the author writes there are "many myths" and "Every religion and every culture in the world seems to have its own creation myth" and then writes about "All four creation stories".
    • 16/12/2006
    • 14:18:14
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • WESTERN RECYCLE FIELD

    You presented the facts well, however introduced new topics in the conclusion that I thought could have been better developed.
    • 16/12/2006
    • 14:04:37
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Title: Diet and Exercise: Problem, solution or excuse?

    Nicely written and brings up valid points. Expanding on alternatives would have been nice, but there's only so much information that can go into a 1,000 word paper.
    • 22/10/2006
    • 11:50:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Downing Man!!

    Powerful!
    • 15/10/2006
    • 11:08:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Abortion-- A view from the pro choise and pro life

    Good essay. A tough topic which you handled well.
    • 15/10/2006
    • 10:56:35
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • The Scream- analysis of painting

    The author did a good job in briefly summarizing his interpretation of this painting.
    • 12/08/2006
    • 22:35:03
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Cuban missile crisis

    It was really hard for me to get past all the fragmented sentences and grammatical errors. I think this could have been a good paper had more effort been put into it.
    • 12/08/2006
    • 22:29:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The Outsiders

    This is a classic story, and I think the author did a fine job summarizing. I appreciate that an 8th grader can understand and see how this story can be compared with today's problems.
    • 11/08/2006
    • 18:14:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Accounting scandals

    I agree with Krezay, the author should have mentioned Sarb-Ox. Also, the essay didn't really talk about how accountants are changing their image.
    • 11/08/2006
    • 18:08:38
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good but no references

    Good paper, clearly written and concise, however I noticed a lack of references.
    • 30/07/2006
    • 10:31:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good quality

    Well written and persuasive. The author leaves much food for thought.
    • 30/07/2006
    • 10:20:39
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Not that good

    I didn't care for the way this essay was structured, and don't think that the use of first person is appropriate for the subject.
    • 30/07/2006
    • 09:43:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper

    Nicely done. Hits well on the four functions and explains them clearly.
    • 30/07/2006
    • 09:09:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    Well written and provides a lot of detail.
    • 30/07/2006
    • 09:03:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    Excellent analysis and thoroughly done.
    • 27/07/2006
    • 19:00:53
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well put for how short the essay/memo was written. A lot of info in a compact assignment.
    • 23/07/2006
    • 12:03:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done

    You addressed each concept in the simulation in a short, yet precise manner. I would have ellaborated more on the Application of Learning to Workplace, I don't understand how you are comparing "learning by doing" to comparaive advantage.
    • 23/07/2006
    • 11:39:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.