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  • Thanks

    the information you provide in your paper was very helpful thanks again
    • 09/03/2009
    • 12:01:48
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  • Good

    thanks for the info
    • 01/02/2009
    • 23:59:14
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  • Thank you

    you gave me some ideas on what to write about
    • 01/02/2009
    • 03:31:12
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  • Nice

    thank you for the idea on a media essay on this topic.
    • 25/01/2009
    • 11:38:45
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  • Plan

    I excepted more
    • 22/01/2009
    • 12:26:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I cannot believe people are still using Wikipedia......
    • 05/01/2009
    • 01:03:09
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  • Nice

    thank you for the information it is a great help
    • 05/01/2009
    • 01:00:16
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  • Nice

    The information provided in this essay was very helpful. Very well written. thank you
    • 02/12/2008
    • 13:17:20
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  • Wow

    a little long got tired right in the middle of paper..
    • 26/10/2008
    • 10:53:05
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  • Okay

    thank you for the information
    • 01/10/2008
    • 12:52:52
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  • Nice

    you offer a lot of information, thank youvery helpful
    • 01/10/2008
    • 12:50:08
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  • Wow

    You have a lot of information, thank you. you gave me a different way to write on the writing of the old testament.
    • 01/10/2008
    • 12:46:44
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  • Nice

    thank you for your information on religions. this essay was very helpful.
    • 22/09/2008
    • 10:25:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I enjoyed your essay thank you
    • 03/09/2008
    • 18:18:14
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  • Not bad

    knowing the syllabus this is a really short essay. nice job
    • 27/08/2008
    • 02:46:05
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  • However

    your content is very nice. good job,
    • 05/06/2008
    • 08:47:20
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  • Source

    To use Wikipedia as a source in college writing is not academically correct. Wikipedia is not a reliable source.
    • 05/06/2008
    • 08:46:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Sources

    Wikipedia is not a reliable source in college writing.
    • 03/06/2008
    • 16:32:20
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  • Not bad

    nice work on your paper.. much better than mine......
    • 29/05/2008
    • 11:35:20
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Rethink my remark

    After completing a little bit of research I found this paper was nothing more than CUT AND PASTE.... everything is word for word. I am disappointed that someone claiming to be a college student would use this method to write a paper.........
    • 27/05/2008
    • 16:45:33
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  • Short

    short and to the point right...
    • 27/05/2008
    • 15:30:30
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  • Nice

    I like the information you offered in this paper. the links you also provided are very helpful...
    • 26/05/2008
    • 16:12:20
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  • Helpful

    information you provide has been very helpful thank you. I enjoyed reading your paper.
    • 23/05/2008
    • 08:38:36
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  • Wow

    You have offered a lot of information. Just when I thought I was close to the end of the paper you offered something different. Thank you for you information I know it will come in handy
    • 23/05/2008
    • 07:24:28
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  • Nice

    Nice information thank you this will help with the paper I myself need to write.
    • 23/05/2008
    • 07:17:13
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  • Not bad

    This essay is not bad nice work.
    • 23/05/2008
    • 07:12:01
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  • Okay

    you have offered a lot of information in this essay and you are right the lines are split down the middle. The government however cannot make everyone happy. As long as the attempt to protect American lives is there, I am for it.. I have nothing to hide...........
    • 23/05/2008
    • 07:08:56
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  • Short

    short and straight to the point. nice
    • 23/05/2008
    • 07:03:56
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  • Agreed

    I hear what you are saying and I agree. But it still goes back to it you are not doing anything wrong.... who cares who is listening.......... Nice paper.
    • 23/05/2008
    • 06:59:53
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  • Okay

    your conclusion is right on. the rest of your paper is well written some areas seem to be out dated.
    • 12/05/2008
    • 12:49:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I hear what you are saying. Nice essay
    • 12/05/2008
    • 05:18:55
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  • Short and sweet

    you were right to the point, nice paper.
    • 03/05/2008
    • 12:34:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I like

    I like the information you provided.. I think you hit the nail right on the head.. thanks
    • 03/05/2008
    • 12:23:22
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Agree

    I agree with the last comment. I enjoyed your content, just not you format.. Good job on the info.
    • 26/04/2008
    • 19:37:03
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  • Not sure

    I thought this was a paper and it is not... So what is it? okay you got me, I do not know what this is....
    • 15/04/2008
    • 09:17:44
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  • Good

    good information thank you for the essay. this essay is well written..
    • 04/04/2008
    • 01:50:17
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  • Nice

    I like your information, this is so on point.. thanks this will help me with my paper..
    • 28/03/2008
    • 06:13:50
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  • Nice

    Great help, thank you for the information. this is a well written essay with one problem writing in first person is not appropriate in college writing.
    • 22/03/2008
    • 02:01:55
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  • Good

    Good information but writing in first person is not appropriate in college writing
    • 22/03/2008
    • 01:54:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed

    I agree with the last comment writing in first person is not appropriate in college writing
    • 22/03/2008
    • 01:52:35
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  • Short

    short and sweet but with good information. thank you
    • 22/03/2008
    • 01:49:32
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    Tons on information, to bad some of your information came from Wikipedia not a good source of information....
    • 19/03/2008
    • 07:50:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    Well written just a little short, more information could have been added.
    • 19/03/2008
    • 07:44:16
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  • Good

    Your information was very helpful, would have like more input on the "physiological needs."
    • 19/03/2008
    • 07:30:40
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  • Thank you

    Your information within this essay has helped me a great deal. thank you again, nice work.
    • 19/03/2008
    • 06:24:27
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  • Nice

    Nicely written and a lot of references. thank you.
    • 16/03/2008
    • 01:44:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The information is good thanks for you input
    • 16/03/2008
    • 01:41:29
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I enjoyed reading your essay, nice information.
    • 05/03/2008
    • 20:41:01
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  • Right

    I hear what you are saying, I can remember growing up and things have changed. good points.
    • 05/03/2008
    • 20:20:35
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  • Needs more

    The information is fairly bland, more information would be more helpful. Maybe expand your essay a little more to help draw readers in.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 03:47:39
    • Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Nicely written, maybe a little more information but I got the idea.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 03:23:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    Loved your information thanks. I enjoyed your paper
    • 03/03/2008
    • 03:12:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • References

    it would have been nice to see a reference list to follow your information. nice content.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 03:00:10
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  • Okay

    your paper was okay, not as helpful as I had hoped for.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 02:51:31
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  • Oh my god

    where does it end......great information just a lot of it. your references go on longer than the paper. thanks for the info.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 02:30:39
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  • Lucky

    Lucky I found this paper, great content and is a great help. the information will help me in completing my paper. thank you
    • 03/03/2008
    • 02:21:11
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  • Wow

    You have a lot of information and you are trying to slam it all in to this little paper. you have several miss spelling and at times I got lose reading. Expected a little better for a college student.
    • 03/03/2008
    • 02:14:31
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  • Wow

    There is a lot of information in this essay. this will help me put our team paper together, thank you.
    • 01/03/2008
    • 17:45:45
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    The information you provided in your essay has been a great help thank you.
    • 01/03/2008
    • 17:26:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    This essay has great information, thank you for your essay this is going to help with my paper..
    • 01/03/2008
    • 17:19:30
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Your essay was nicely written, thank you for the help with my essay..
    • 01/03/2008
    • 11:08:28
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  • Okay

    The content was okay, this essay was a little helpful. thank you
    • 01/03/2008
    • 10:51:01
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  • Okay

    I hear your information, would be nice if there was more.
    • 29/02/2008
    • 17:31:44
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  • Wow

    your essay is very nicely written and full of great information. thanks for your essay.
    • 29/02/2008
    • 17:16:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    your paper has been great help and full of information.
    • 29/02/2008
    • 17:09:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    your information has been great help, thank you.
    • 29/02/2008
    • 16:49:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Have you researched disparities in the adult legal system, you might find the information very close to your information on juveniles..
    • 16/01/2008
    • 17:48:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    there is so much information here I do not know where to start.. I think you hit it right on the head.. good work.
    • 16/01/2008
    • 17:41:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great help

    the information you have is great, it would be nice if the paper was more recent. thank you
    • 16/01/2008
    • 17:35:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • To short

    There is good information, just a little to short...
    • 16/01/2008
    • 16:57:33
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good info

    Good information, this may help me with my paper thanks...
    • 16/01/2008
    • 16:55:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    nice written, the information will come in handly thank you
    • 02/12/2007
    • 12:27:05
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    Thank you for the information you have in this essay, some of this information will come in handle.
    • 21/11/2007
    • 15:19:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    There is some good information in your essay, thank you your information will help me with my paper...
    • 02/10/2007
    • 10:10:51
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  • Nice

    I hear what you are saying and I agree with you on most points. I also agree that our children need our help and our justice system need to help as well.
    • 27/09/2007
    • 09:26:03
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  • Short

    More of a comment than a paper...............
    • 26/09/2007
    • 06:10:10
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  • Nice

    I enjoyed your essay and the format you used in delivering your information... Thank you.
    • 26/09/2007
    • 05:50:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    You have a lot of information, I seem to get lost in your essay though. You repeat words in several of your sentences. There could have been some rewording, but you would have loss your word count... It seems you were more concerned with word count and not what your sentence sounded like....
    • 26/09/2007
    • 05:44:27
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  • Sites

    Nice work and well sited. Most essays are not sited and the person reading the essay is unable to verify the source, so thank you for your sites...
    • 26/09/2007
    • 05:11:21
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  • Very nice

    You have very nice formatting, your essay is easy to read and understand... Again very nice.
    • 26/09/2007
    • 04:50:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    The information you have in you essay is very helpful, I just do not like your format. Thank you for your information.
    • 26/09/2007
    • 04:38:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    How did that happen? I gave my opinion on what I felt a flag should stand for and I was docked a point? I still stick by what I said before a flag alone is not a symbol of racism. It is the people behind the flag that symbolizes racism. Wake up everyone----we are where racism comes from not objects.......
    • 24/09/2007
    • 05:51:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • One of my first

    This was one of my first, please feel free to give me your comments, thanks.
    • 16/09/2007
    • 16:32:32
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Helpful

    I like you have written this essay, you have some very interesting parts. Nice and very helpful.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 08:32:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Nice information thanks, will come in handy.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 08:26:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 2nd time

    After reading this essay a second time, I found it to be more joyful to read. I understand the need for the great deal of information within this paper.. thanks.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 06:19:04
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  • Great help

    This essay has been a great help, although it would be even more helpful if there were references that someone could look up.. thanks for your info.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 06:14:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Information

    You have great information just needs to be worded differently. Thanks for you information.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 06:08:01
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    This essay could have been better written, some statements make no sense. I think I understand what you are trying to say but I think if you would have spent more time fine tuning this paper it could be a great paper.
    • 04/09/2007
    • 06:06:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great help

    Your information is a great help, your essay is very nicely written. Thanks.
    • 03/09/2007
    • 13:28:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good information

    Thanks for your information this will help with my essay.
    • 03/09/2007
    • 13:22:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    Your comment was very nice thank you. I found that the teacher enjoyed the formatting. The formating is not for everyone. Thank you again...
    • 28/08/2007
    • 00:38:45
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you

    The information you provided on my reference from Wikipedia, was so right on. When I first started using information from Wiki. I had no idea that the information was written from anyone that wanted to write something.. But we learn as we go and I have learned. Thank you for you input.
    • 27/08/2007
    • 05:48:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The Flag

    Not all would agree with you. A flag alone does not symbolize racism, it is the people behind the flag that are using it for racism. Many people fly the confederate flag to show their heritage of the south as many other individuals do. Mexicans fly Mexico's flag and so on, do not be so judgmental on someone flying a flag representing their heritage.
    • 27/08/2007
    • 05:44:21
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    Short and to the point, just not very interesting...
    • 27/08/2007
    • 05:23:28
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool

    Nice paper, thanks for the info... great references.
    • 25/08/2007
    • 13:44:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Half way through I already knew what was coming.. but the essay is not that bad.
    • 25/08/2007
    • 13:36:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    This is not bad. Good information.
    • 25/08/2007
    • 13:31:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    This is better than worth reading. Very nicely written and informative. Thank you for the information..
    • 25/08/2007
    • 13:08:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Nice reading and good information, just no references to follow.
    • 21/08/2007
    • 17:25:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lots of info

    Lots of information, I really enjoyed reading this essay. A bit long but great information. This essay really helped with my up coming class. Thank you.
    • 21/08/2007
    • 17:15:00
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I enjoyed this author's essay. The information was very helpful. The only information this essay was lacking was references...
    • 21/08/2007
    • 17:07:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    This author has a great deal of information, maybe to much. As I first started to read, you had my attention, as I continued to read I became tired of reading. It is a bit long, but good information. Great references..
    • 21/08/2007
    • 16:58:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Not bad a lot of information... ton of references really nice... thanks for the information..
    • 13/08/2007
    • 13:34:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    This essay is not bad for an eight grader, but where is your sources and reference list.. I like some of the information you have but how can I find more if you do not list where you got your information..
    • 26/07/2007
    • 01:55:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    The information was okay. Where is your sources? You have some of your paragraphs cited but no reference list.
    • 26/07/2007
    • 01:51:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very helpful

    Nicely written. Although you have so much information within your essay, I believe you could have had a shorter essay. Great use of references.
    • 28/06/2007
    • 02:06:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    The information in this essay is well written. The information you have is very helpful. Thank you.
    • 28/06/2007
    • 02:00:44
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good information

    I have read a lot of essays were everyone is talking about the fourth amendment and I am all for that, but if you have not done anything wrong what are we trying to hide? If you are against drugs and the use of drugs is this not a good way to weed the users out? I like your essay..
    • 25/06/2007
    • 04:47:01
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I hear you

    I like what you have to say, you put up a good fight. Although, I agree that a person should have the right to the fourth amendment. But think about this for a moment, if you are not guilty of a crime what are you trying to hide? Nice essay...
    • 25/06/2007
    • 04:34:58
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    The information was very helpful. I like the way you wrote your essay. You made it easy to understand.
    • 03/06/2007
    • 17:38:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • So-so

    Sorry this paper really did not do anything for me. The information could have been a little better....
    • 03/06/2007
    • 17:29:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    A lot on information. This helped me with the info I need for my defense statement and questions..ty
    • 29/05/2007
    • 08:44:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Almost right on

    Do you know someone who works in corrections? Or do you work in a prison....almost right on. needs a little more research...almost everything can be use in the field of corrections......
    • 19/05/2007
    • 19:25:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • To the point

    Your essay is to the point, I like that. You have some good information in your paper.Nice work.
    • 14/05/2007
    • 01:50:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Nicely written, thank you, I got a few good points from reading your paper. Keep up the good work.
    • 13/05/2007
    • 02:22:43
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    This was a nice essay thanks for the insight.
    • 02/05/2007
    • 15:43:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Not a bad essay just a little blah, but thank you.
    • 14/04/2007
    • 10:37:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    Nice wording, this essay was a little helpful in understanding DNA. There is a lot of information in your paper. Nice work.
    • 14/04/2007
    • 10:18:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great help

    The information you provided was very helpful...only one thing I think is wrong, you provided no references. It would have been nice to look at some of your sources...
    • 11/04/2007
    • 03:37:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    This has given me a different way in understanding this topic.
    • 11/04/2007
    • 02:46:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I liked

    Nicely put, your information was useful to me. Thank you.
    • 08/04/2007
    • 02:42:00
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well covered

    A lot of information very nicely written. Your paper gave me a different view point on CSI effect.... Thank you.
    • 23/03/2007
    • 09:16:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Basic

    I did not feel it is very informative and some of the information gathered is from an unreliable source. I personally did not find this essay very helpful.
    • 18/03/2007
    • 06:37:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very interesting

    I like the way you put your words. Many do not see the truth about law enforcers. They are to quick to make bad judgements because of one bad apple, many police officers are truly there to help fight crime.
    • 12/02/2007
    • 12:18:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    This essay shows good research and is well worded. The information in this essay is well placed and informative. Nice work..
    • 06/02/2007
    • 20:16:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.