The evidence supporting the topic is given in detail. Except I don't know why the Survey was attached to the one-passage answer.
- 31/07/2006
- 11:09:53
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This essay is a little short for an 11th Grader. Need some more arguments and better evidence supporting the topic.
- 31/07/2006
- 11:07:31
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Except the grammer, spelling, and punctuation mistakes...this essay is not bad for a 1st grader. :)
- 31/07/2006
- 11:05:31
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This essay is pretty thorough and detailed but has too much repetition of the word "love". I know that the essay's theme is about "love" but you could have used other words. I don't know, maybe its just me.
- 31/07/2006
- 11:03:41
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I totally agree with your essay and it has really helped me. Thanks a lot. Great information and thorough.
- 25/07/2006
- 11:59:35
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