Very good thesis, it is well written, and concluded very well. I would definitely use this essay as an example.
- 07/08/2006
- 11:12:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Thats all I have to say, this is an awsome, brilliantly written essay.
- 07/08/2006
- 09:25:32
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like this alot, very good flow.
- 07/08/2006
- 09:18:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You need to add more types of subcultures in, this essay doesn't look finished to me.
- 07/08/2006
- 09:10:52
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I really like the way you concluded the essay, your thesis was pretty good too...3 star essay :P
- 07/08/2006
- 09:09:00
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really like this entry, its very interesting too read.
- 07/08/2006
- 09:04:58
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Too many "i thinks" but not to bad otherwise.
- 07/08/2006
- 08:59:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your thesis needs work, its a little jumpy.
- 07/08/2006
- 08:57:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is just an assignment, no answers or essays- nothing of help really.
- 06/08/2006
- 13:30:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay's content, its very interesting even though I was not interested by the title.
- 06/08/2006
- 12:19:50
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really like the way you put this poem in the speech I think it is done very well :)
- 05/08/2006
- 19:44:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.