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It's a decent essay... but it looks like you need to work on your essay structure... english college professors would bite off your head if you gave them a two sentence concluding paragraph... that isn't even a conclusion... so keep structure in mind- intro, body, conclusion - really important elements in a good essay- 28/08/2006
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