wow.. Informative. Pretty good! keep it up :)
- 16/04/2007
- 18:44:13
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I liked it. A lot. Very good. You expressed the feelings of love, however, like you said, "what is love" is not a simple question to answer. It is so many things when it comes to emotion and more precious then any gem. It sings the most beautiful song from heaven, and when love is broken, all you hear are the screeching cries of hell. Great essay, I suggest it to anyone that believes in love.
- 11/09/2006
- 18:29:47
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Truely amazing. I felt the sorrowness of the people who had their homes burnt to ashes. That is quite sad. And you are right. How ironic is that????????
- 10/09/2006
- 10:44:13
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And amazing.... now that's gonna haunt me!
- 10/09/2006
- 09:57:32
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Freaky.... but good.
- 10/09/2006
- 07:57:07
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Very touching poem. I felt the emotions in this poem. GREAT JOB!
- 10/09/2006
- 07:41:51
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How beautiful! well...I'm not sure I feel for seth, But I feel quite happy for him! To give up your job for your children is quite selfless. amazing.
- 10/09/2006
- 07:37:02
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That's half the reason I don't go to McDonalds. The other half... You don't know what they cook in those burgers.
- 10/09/2006
- 07:30:49
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Great! that was really good. I can't wait to read the rest of it! I almost cried for you. Wait... this is a true story, right?
- 10/09/2006
- 07:26:08
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Beautiful. I myself love poetry. This expresses full meaning. lol, for some reason, I had that song, "i don't want you back" playing in my head the whole time.
- 07/09/2006
- 16:14:15
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Wow, very good story. Rape is a burden for most girls, and yes they do get treated this way, after all, I've experienced it. Well done :)
- 02/09/2006
- 12:07:05
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As a female believer in islam myself, I agree to this essay to a great deal. Its so true how you pointed this out about women being equal amongst men. I remember going to pakistan and seeing how women were being treated, and it wasn't very pleasent. Therefore, you are correct on what the quran says.
- 31/08/2006
- 15:31:32
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This essay made me cry! It was amazing. I loved it! It touches the heart of people. I have never lost a love one but im sure the pain is unbarrable.
- 31/08/2006
- 15:19:48
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Wow very long.... and something to get people's attention to. I agree on what you wrote about how women are being treated though, as if they are animals. Very good. Well supported and detailed. Although not the most appropriate, I believe this was a fantastic article.
- 30/08/2006
- 08:21:36
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