I found your essay really interesting. You wrote it in a way that attracted my attention. Wonderful piece!
- 13/09/2006
- 04:40:49
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Did you really get 100% for this? I mean its not bad but still a few spelling and grammar errors so I dont know how it could of got that mark.
- 13/09/2006
- 04:37:47
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In the intro it should say the purpose not this purpose. But I really thought you structured the essay really well!
- 13/09/2006
- 04:34:52
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Great essay. You can tell you researched a lot but yea, you can make the essay flow better if the first sentence in the intro makes more sense.
- 13/09/2006
- 04:12:51
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