Good essay and lots of info, but there's a blatant amount of repetition concerning how violence and sexual explicit material hinder's the audiences' potential to remember commercials.
- 07/10/2006
- 21:41:53
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This essay has a lot of really good information but (I don't know what you're teacher required so for all I know, this may have been the formatt the teacher requested) there really isn't a flow from one paragraph to the other. There also seems to lack an introduction and a conclusion as well as a thesis...youdon't seem to have a position on information you have provided. Than again maybe you were just asked to provide information without your opinion, I don't know, but this is just my feedback
- 07/10/2006
- 21:31:17
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I have written essays about the Nazi's use of propaganda to acheive their ends and I find this essay really well written. You could have included Hitler's youth movement camps which he used to assimlate the youths of the Reich into the Nazi mentality. All in all, it's really good work!
- 23/09/2006
- 13:46:52
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Wow Tjop is right, I never remember writing essays this long, but I appreciate your analysis of the movie, it is nicely done. Keep it up homie.
- 23/09/2006
- 13:37:04
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