You really have a great ideas but I think u misunderstood parts of the poem and with lots of mistakes though ur essay, such as, when u said: "The main theme in this story" this is a poem not a story!! Also love is not a main theme it is just a minor theme, and I think the main theme is that lose of religion not really faith, because faith is part of the religion and if faith it have to be the lose of faith. When u said: "His line "Listen! You hear the grating roar, of pebbles which the waves draw back, and fling." It is not actually one line so to represent that it is more than one line u should write it in the form: "His line "Listen! You hear the grating roar/Of pebbles which the waves draw back, and fling" and it dose not give the reader action of dreams he just uses the imagery "Liston" to draw the reader attention.
- 16/03/2007
- 13:45:31
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Nice structure for the essay, but I completely disagree about the idea of Irony because we do not really know who is the speaker and to whom he is talking?Also I disagree about the idea that this poem is about love. I think the main idea is about loss of religion. Love is minor theme and it does not represent his love with his wife, it represents the love between ppl that is gone, and he hopes that the love come back.
- 16/03/2007
- 13:32:01
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Good essay but I feel sometimes I understood the poem differently, such as, when u said: "that no matter what happens misery and suffering will always be present in the world." I disagree, because the reader said at the last stanza: "Ah, love, let us be trueTo one another!" he means that he want ppl to come together and help each other, but actually that does not happened. Also when he said: "The Sea of FaithWas once" he is saying that there was faith before but not now.Over all good essay but u did not actually explain the idea of the "grating roar" and what does it represent?
- 16/03/2007
- 13:18:07
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Seriously I liked your lab report, but in your hypothesis u did not follow the method of If...Then...Because. Also u used lost of personal nouns, such as "I" if u wanna write a hypothesis it should be clear of these nouns. Overall your hypothesis was clear and deep. And thanks again.
- 19/02/2007
- 18:03:54
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I like this essay, also I like the ideas. you have a really great ideas. It helped me alot, but I still do not get what is bullock. Thanks again for this essay it helped me to have great ideas.
- 15/10/2006
- 19:01:27
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This essay contains alots of good and great ideas and it looks like you understand the book properly. GOOD JOB!!
- 05/10/2006
- 15:24:21
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