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  • Good job.

    Good idea on putting questions before each paragraph. These helped the reader understand what that paragraph was going to analyze. Good Work :)
    • 26/10/2006
    • 12:35:07
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  • Good opening paragraph

    The opening paragraph was good because you got the reader thinking right off the bat. The quote was a good way to start this process in the readers head. I also liked how you put questions in there. These questions help the reader understand what your paper will be about.NICE JOB :)
    • 24/10/2006
    • 14:50:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.