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  • Support your ideas

    The content of the essay is good but it lacks support. You are missing quotes which takes away the integrity of your views.Also, you switch verb tenses a lot, you should use present. For example: "He dressed himself," "Paul chose death." Otherwise, it could be a good essay.
    • 13/09/2007
    • 15:44:34
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  • Accurate and informative

    Hi, this is a great essay. I am presonally from turkey and live in the US. This essay shows very accurate information. It's true that Turkey is considered to have "always been the crossroads of Europe, and Asia." It was the cause of many religious wars in earlier centuries (15th and 16th) and to this modern day, has had great influence in the world. Of the modern day news, you have provided many great examples and these clearly depict an accurate point of view.This essay is very strong, and informative.
    • 16/10/2006
    • 17:14:20
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.