This is only an overview to a debate campaign that neither clarifies nor answers any of the questions at hand. Needs to be brought together in format with thoughts and ideas to these questions.
- 08/03/2007
- 02:16:48
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Overall, this is a pretty good essay. Have some punctuation errors and some run-on sentences. There are also a few sentence fragments that need revised.
- 07/03/2007
- 05:02:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This looks more like notes than an essay. It is missing a thesis and the traditional essay format. Needs structure and some cleaning up.
- 06/03/2007
- 12:09:24
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The paper seems to be informative and well written. Good Job.
- 20/01/2007
- 06:34:42
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This essay gives someone something to think about. Good job and lots of creativity.
- 09/01/2007
- 16:42:53
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Was a pretty good article considering the grade level. A few minor errors however content of subject matter was good.
- 09/01/2007
- 16:34:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Really concise with details and put together really well.
- 05/11/2006
- 17:46:23
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We do need to be thankful for what we have here in the good old U.S.A.
- 29/10/2006
- 16:21:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Found this article to be very informative. Sounded like some pretty good facts.
- 28/10/2006
- 17:16:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.