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  • No Input to this "Essay"

    This is only an overview to a debate campaign that neither clarifies nor answers any of the questions at hand. Needs to be brought together in format with thoughts and ideas to these questions.
    • 08/03/2007
    • 02:16:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty Good.

    Overall, this is a pretty good essay. Have some punctuation errors and some run-on sentences. There are also a few sentence fragments that need revised.
    • 07/03/2007
    • 05:02:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Undeveloped essay

    This looks more like notes than an essay. It is missing a thesis and the traditional essay format. Needs structure and some cleaning up.
    • 06/03/2007
    • 12:09:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Informative Paper

    The paper seems to be informative and well written. Good Job.
    • 20/01/2007
    • 06:34:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very creative

    This essay gives someone something to think about. Good job and lots of creativity.
    • 09/01/2007
    • 16:42:53
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty Good

    Was a pretty good article considering the grade level. A few minor errors however content of subject matter was good.
    • 09/01/2007
    • 16:34:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job!

    Really concise with details and put together really well.
    • 05/11/2006
    • 17:46:23
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    We do need to be thankful for what we have here in the good old U.S.A.
    • 29/10/2006
    • 16:21:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Dms267hun

    Found this article to be very informative. Sounded like some pretty good facts.
    • 28/10/2006
    • 17:16:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.