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  • Neelo

    Neelo,Thank you for stopping in and reading my essay. I too found it to be a boring topic, however now that I go back and read the essay, I would have constructed and written this one a bit differently.Thank you again. I wills top in and read yours as well.
    • 09/03/2010
    • 12:00:06
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  • Jiji

    Jiji,Thank you for the kind words. I will be sure and check out your essays as well. Thank you for reading and critiquing :)
    • 09/03/2010
    • 11:58:12
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  • Exlawyer

    To exlawer, I'm sorry you felt that way. This was in my Freshman year, and I actually felt that back then I wrote a pretty good essay; however I will say looking back now that I too would have structured my content differently in addition to working on the transition of my sentenance and paragraphs. Overall I did receive a good grade. Thank you for your comment.
    • 09/03/2010
    • 11:55:46
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  • WoW!!

    For High School level; this paper is interesting to read and yet it is also well thought out and constructed. Kuddos! GREAT job!
    • 13/11/2008
    • 06:56:55
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