Yeah I don't really think those subtitles are necessary, and you could have gone into more depth on some of the points. Not bad though.
- 09/11/2006
- 15:17:07
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This is a very detailed piece, some key points made.
- 09/11/2006
- 15:15:13
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Wow this essay is very good for the age level given and the 82% mark given, worth more in my opinion. Good work.
- 08/11/2006
- 07:10:52
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