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A Comparison and Contrast of Popular Music and Lyrics in the 1950's and Today
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Wooden Statue
- 219 words (1 pages)
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The Comparison and Contrast of "A Dream Deferred "and "Dream Variations"
- 906 words (4 pages)
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Comments List
Solid but rough around the edges
This essay is great on info but weak on form, teachers in my experience tend to look at the form of one's essay before grading it. Form will make you or break you. Try to make a stronger intro; a one line thesis just wont do, try to lengthen the conclusion I feel it just cuts off... but over all good job.- 05/12/2006
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