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  • Solid but rough around the edges

    This essay is great on info but weak on form, teachers in my experience tend to look at the form of one's essay before grading it. Form will make you or break you. Try to make a stronger intro; a one line thesis just wont do, try to lengthen the conclusion I feel it just cuts off... but over all good job.
    • 05/12/2006
    • 08:37:10
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.