This was short, writer needed to focus on more facts, research and focus on writing style to improve essay
- 31/03/2008
- 10:55:33
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You did such a great job, well written. Perfect example of how an essay should be
- 31/03/2008
- 10:54:02
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well written, addictions explained thoroughly
- 31/03/2008
- 10:52:32
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essay was informative, but details could have been better put with examples towards the condition, and better conclusion
- 31/03/2008
- 10:51:18
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I found your essay very informative and as well also gained a lot of info
- 31/03/2008
- 10:50:00
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Perhaps presenting it in a more experiment process, and analyzing results more would have been good
- 31/03/2008
- 10:48:38
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well written, constructed well. I felt the author really tackled the subject
- 13/03/2008
- 07:40:06
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I found it a great read, though I would have gone more in depth with the statistical factors thats just my opinion
- 13/03/2008
- 07:37:14
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i thought this was a well written essay, and found it informative, although i may have focused on research methods ( that all really depends on what you being asked to analyze)
- 13/03/2008
- 07:34:40
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I found this essay really informative, as it helped me with my essay that I too am writing on this topic, it helped broaden ideas which i can explore for my own essay
- 01/03/2008
- 15:40:08
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I thought this essay was really good, perhaps comparisons to Mcdonald's findings would have been great, also a list of references as i on many occasions wanted to refer to your references but overall great work
- 01/03/2008
- 14:57:50
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I think there should have been more detail of the stages, but overall good information
- 01/03/2008
- 14:54:12
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It helped me get some ideas for writing my own essay, its always interesting to see others work to get more ideas thanks
- 28/02/2008
- 16:35:56
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