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  • Suggestion

    This was short, writer needed to focus on more facts, research and focus on writing style to improve essay
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:55:33
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  • Great Job

    You did such a great job, well written. Perfect example of how an essay should be
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:54:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    well written, addictions explained thoroughly
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:52:32
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  • Suggestion

    essay was informative, but details could have been better put with examples towards the condition, and better conclusion
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:51:18
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  • Interesting

    I found your essay very informative and as well also gained a lot of info
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:50:00
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  • Suggestion

    Perhaps presenting it in a more experiment process, and analyzing results more would have been good
    • 31/03/2008
    • 10:48:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wonderful

    well written, constructed well. I felt the author really tackled the subject
    • 13/03/2008
    • 07:40:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    I found it a great read, though I would have gone more in depth with the statistical factors thats just my opinion
    • 13/03/2008
    • 07:37:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    i thought this was a well written essay, and found it informative, although i may have focused on research methods ( that all really depends on what you being asked to analyze)
    • 13/03/2008
    • 07:34:40
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant

    I found this essay really informative, as it helped me with my essay that I too am writing on this topic, it helped broaden ideas which i can explore for my own essay
    • 01/03/2008
    • 15:40:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • VERY good

    I thought this essay was really good, perhaps comparisons to Mcdonald's findings would have been great, also a list of references as i on many occasions wanted to refer to your references but overall great work
    • 01/03/2008
    • 14:57:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • More about stages

    I think there should have been more detail of the stages, but overall good information
    • 01/03/2008
    • 14:54:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    It helped me get some ideas for writing my own essay, its always interesting to see others work to get more ideas thanks
    • 28/02/2008
    • 16:35:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.