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  • Concise

    A very good essay that is to the point. Keep up the level and you have the potential to do even better. Best wishes.
    • 16/01/2007
    • 07:35:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Monolithic Approach

    This essay reinforces Samuel Huntington's "Clash of the Civilisation". It is not critical since it is based on media stereotypes. It would be better if in future the author used all those writings on Islam and the West develop a deconstructionist heterogeneous analysis.
    • 16/01/2007
    • 07:27:30
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Analytical Work

    A very good work that demonstrates a degree of analysis on the part of the author. Persevere on that way!
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:52:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Useful

    A very good and helpful essay. Keep it up!!
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:49:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    Simple but very enlightening essay.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:47:26
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A bit too narrative

    The essay is a bit too narrative and does not contain much analysis. Yet, it is quite good for a start.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:44:19
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Outstanding

    Your work is superb. It is well organised and can easily be understood. Keep it up!
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:39:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • You are on the Right Track

    Good essay in general. You are on the right track. Still, you must strive to do better since your essay reveals that you have the potential to do so.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:37:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Overall it is a good essay.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:34:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wonderful Essay

    A brilliant essay that is very revolutionary since contemporary theories have been used in the analysis. You will be a great scholar if you stick on that track.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:32:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good piece of work

    A good piece of work since the context is not ignored. You will produce brilliant essays in future if you keep up that trend.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 17:29:14
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Helpful Essay to General Paper Students

    A very Good Essay that is helpful to General Paper students sitting for Cambridge Higher School Certificate.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 08:18:41
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Too Short

    The article is too brief. Many important points are missing.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 08:06:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Satisfactory

    Satisfactory work. You will do better with time.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 06:53:20
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay but a bit too brief

    This is a good essay as it gives the reader a general information on Abu Ali Hasan Ibn al-Haitham. However, it is a bit too brief. It would have been a superb piece if the author gave more details.
    • 11/01/2007
    • 05:21:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Straightforward Essay

    A very simple essay that is straight to the point. Keep it up!
    • 11/01/2007
    • 05:13:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Breaking the taboo

    Many societies do not talk about Human trafficking and forced child prostitution as these phenomenons are looked upon as taboos. It is high time to educate people on these social evils. We should all stand together to fight these phenomenons so that human dignity can be restored.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 10:53:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Overall it is a good essay. The level of the author will surely be upgraded with practice and intensive reading.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 10:15:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Inspirational Essay

    This essay is down to earth as it gives a realist description of how they usually expect their teachers to be. May that essay be a source of inspiration to teachers.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 10:08:13
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Closeness between the reader and the I personna of the Essay

    A well written essay that emotionally involves the reader. There is no distance between the I Personna of the essay and the reader. Students should be encouraged to write essays that creates an intimacy between the reader and the protagonist of stories.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 09:51:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Critical Essay

    It is a good analysis. At this level the author has been successful in doing an analytical literary essay. Cling on that approach !
    • 10/01/2007
    • 09:20:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Objective Essay

    It is indeed a very good essay since it does not show any emotional involvement. It has unbiased arguments. Continue with that trend!
    • 10/01/2007
    • 08:54:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Could have done better

    In general it is a good essay. The essay would have been much better if the author had shown how the sytlistic devices used by Dickens reflect the psyche of the characters and how they are in correlation with the settings. Moreover, it could have been shown if the characters are in harmony with their settings. The essay can be improved by dealing deeply with the symbolism of the names.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 08:49:45
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Research Essay

    It is a very good essay that shows a great amount of research. Moreover, the sources are acknowledged. The author is on the right track.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 08:42:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Can do better

    Overall it is indeed a good essay. The adjectives are indeed appropriate. However, the author can improve her concluding style as it is a bit abrupt and this somehow downgrades the level of such an original essay.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 02:09:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    Both the content and the style of this essay are brilliant. Keep it up!
    • 10/01/2007
    • 01:58:36
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written Essay

    A well written essay that uses appropiate words that appeal to the senses and emotions of the readers.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 01:51:06
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A Clear Essay

    The author writes very clearly. The sentences are not too long, the ideas flow, the paragraphs make sense, the essay is well planned and the order of the paragraphs is logical.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 01:37:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thought Provoking

    This essay is indeed thought provoking. Very often children in our countries have their basic needs and many people look over the phenomenon of Child Labour that occurs in poor coutries.
    • 10/01/2007
    • 01:21:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.