Could be improved in places, but definitely an interesting read with good description.
- 11/12/2006
- 07:42:22
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It's very well written, with a good amounts of quotes and detail. Great essay.
- 11/12/2006
- 07:39:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
All you say is 'light quote' 'dark motif' 'light motif', it's too repetitive. There doesn't seem to be point to this essay, really.
- 11/12/2006
- 07:35:38
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting and thought has definitely been put into it.
- 11/12/2006
- 07:34:15
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great introduction and conclusion, it was also very informative. Very good work.
- 10/12/2006
- 11:35:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.