I found the content to be very descriptive and thorough. However, I was not able to make much sense out of the organization. Moreover, it seemed to be an outline not essay.
- 05/05/2007
- 18:39:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great anticipation within this writing. This writing tries to keep the reader on their toes. Because the character was not saying the word "cops", the wording of "cops would sound better if were said "police". This would sound more professional.
- 13/04/2007
- 04:49:52
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay paints vivid images in regards to what the book is about. This essay would make a reader desire to read the novel. Because the essay is at high school level I believe it was well written. However, there should be careful proofreading for run on sentencing.
- 13/04/2007
- 04:29:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like the inclusion of the questionnaire but did find a lot of grammar problems within the paper. Overall I think it would be better if thoroughly proofread.
- 13/04/2007
- 04:26:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was a very good summary of information. The short essay provided the basics of proving the presence of gods. Furthermore, it includes information that is relevant to the opening paragraph.
- 07/04/2007
- 05:32:43
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The author used good examples but I think that taking out the "first person narration" could make it better.
- 30/12/2006
- 12:21:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This article is very direct and tackles the most important aspect of smoking..that it is addictive and bad for your health. For a person in ninth grade I thought this essay was great.
- 30/12/2006
- 12:14:31
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I believe that these are responses to articles. However, without access to the articles it concerns it is hard to know whether or not these are good explanations. Furthermore, it seems that many paragraphs repeat each other (use of similar information).
- 30/12/2006
- 12:03:43
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These three concepts of organizational behavior are three great concepts. But do not forget that there are many other factors that contribute to effective management and the behavior of an orgainzation. Such as culture, politics, and the structure. Therefore, even if motivation, decision making, and communication are present..there are external factors that can overpower the latter.
- 30/12/2006
- 06:12:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like the information but think it would be better if not in first person point of view.
- 25/12/2006
- 05:18:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper was well written and had correct information but needed a stronger thesis statement.
- 24/12/2006
- 21:18:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.