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  • Not bad stuff

    Good points. I like=) Only criticism is that you should've focussed more on fewer points and go more in depth opposed to just skimming over lots of them.
    • 14/07/2007
    • 23:33:40
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  • Amazingly researched

    This is a well written essay. Congratulations.Putting my agnostic beliefs aside...u do know..that Christianity/Catholicism (all sects which refer to the Bible to explain...'everything') was and still is the most dominant culture in developed parts of the world. Anyway, that contradicts your 3rd external point, which in turn contradicts your 1st internal point. You actually base ALL your arguments on the fact that the Bible is uncontradicting and indisputable & u keep pushing that idea by making up spastic percentages and figures. But u take away your first assumption that the Bible is foolproof - and u got nothing, because u do know...all the different sects of Bible-huggers r born from reading the bible in DIFFERENT ways because many things contradict one another and thus produce different ways of reading the book. But anyway, thanks for a very insightful read!
    • 14/07/2007
    • 00:43:56
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  • Excellent

    This essay is great! Well supported in both texts. Add a little bit of contextual influences etc and I would have no complaints.
    • 02/06/2007
    • 20:21:06
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  • Well done!

    Very well written, thorough, convincing essay. Good on techniques for bladerunner, but is lacking for BNW
    • 01/06/2007
    • 05:59:19
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  • Wrong..

    This is hardly an A-range essay. Your word selection is mediocre and cannot b even called an "essay" - too brief. And also never use "etc"
    • 31/05/2007
    • 00:56:33
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  • Loved it

    I really like it=) Great imagery and LOTR ftw!!
    • 07/05/2007
    • 06:33:32
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  • Well done

    A great essay! I'm assuming u did very well in English?
    • 07/05/2007
    • 06:28:23
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  • Very sweet

    A very engaging story and equally well written. Pleasure to read!
    • 20/01/2007
    • 04:55:48
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  • Needs work

    You've got a big dogpile of relevant but not great points which relate to feminist reading. You should've focused on expanding on a few good ones to make them great. It works perfectly as a study guide. But that means you seriously dont deserve that A. Feel free to use my othello essay. One of my three readings was feminist.
    • 20/01/2007
    • 04:51:15
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  • Very precise topic

    The topic is a bit too shallow for my liking. But nonetheless a good argument. As for writing, should watch the colloquialism.
    • 20/01/2007
    • 04:43:13
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  • GREAT

    Excellent well written. A well deserved "A".
    • 15/01/2007
    • 17:15:24
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  • Great

    Not much criticism I can add here. Good use of sophisticated language and I like the way you load on the quotes. Exactly what I'm looking for. THX!
    • 15/01/2007
    • 16:17:42
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  • AWESOME!

    This is great! Very imformative and well researched.
    • 15/01/2007
    • 01:22:10
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  • Great work

    Excellent job! Well written succinct original ideas! Keep it up.
    • 15/01/2007
    • 01:16:50
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  • Great!

    Nice and interesting. Some small spelling and grammar problems but I still get gist of it. No biggie
    • 15/01/2007
    • 01:06:20
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  • Not very analytical at all

    A very short "analysis" and you could work on expanding and expressing your good ideas in a less jovial way. But kudos for ur originality!
    • 15/01/2007
    • 01:00:01
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  • Funny

    Funny annecdote indeed.
    • 12/01/2007
    • 04:40:32
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  • Ridiculous topic

    A very well written essay about nothing of significant importance. Or maybe there is some deep, underlying meaning to your well thought out paper. Keep up the crazy talk=)
    • 12/01/2007
    • 04:14:52
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  • Nice rant

    A well thought out response with decent ideas. But a far too colloquial (for an essay). Need to work on your expression.
    • 12/01/2007
    • 04:03:59
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