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  • Great

    I absolutely agree and I thought you stated it very well.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 13:40:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great essay!

    I read the book and saw the movie and thought your essay on it was great. Good use of vocabulary, smooth transitions that flow well, and your ideas are nice and solid.
    • 29/01/2007
    • 14:21:00
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    I feel as if your ideas did not reach me as they should have. I need to examine your work in order to extract ideas, which I should not have to do: it should stick out and be in your face. Good start but it is far too short.. keep it going.
    • 29/01/2007
    • 13:42:36
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay

    It's quite short.. the point you try to prove must be short I am guessing. Based on your essay, I would say you have some solid ideas which can be expanded to at least 2-3 pages if you pour some thought on how to do so.
    • 29/01/2007
    • 13:40:27
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I thought you wrote decently well.. I'd give it a 95% but not A+... your transitions were shaky in some parts but excellent overall.
    • 26/01/2007
    • 17:00:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Essay!

    Clean, crisp, and concise... point well proven. Great job!
    • 23/01/2007
    • 10:47:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.